Bleeding Crimson

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by The Elemental Dragon (queen of dragons) on Saturday, 28-Oct-2006 10:54:32

this is something I wrote when I was bored. it is the first in my collection of dark themed songs

Bleeding Crimson
By Ashley Gorzelany

I see you falling,
A fallen angel,
I hold you crying,
I hold you bleeding
You scream for love,
You bleed for love,
I saw you bleeding crimson,

I can see you bleeding crimson,
You said you wouldn’t leave
He took my love,
I take my life,

I heard you scream,
I watched you fall,
You knew he’d come,
But still you waited,
In my memory,
A silver blade crashing
I saw you bleeding crimson

I can see you bleeding crimson,
You said you wouldn’t leave,
He took my love,
I take my life,

I can see you bleeding crimson,
You said you wouldn’t leave,
He took my love,
I take my life,
You know I’m bleeding crimson

Post 2 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 31-Oct-2006 8:03:52

I like it ..good work

Post 3 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Friday, 16-Feb-2007 16:06:44

It is good, it sounds like it should be a rock song.